The Ocean’s Fury
The monstrous, horrifying waves crashed against the lighthouse. The frightened men were waiting for a helicopter to come and rescue them. One of the men opened the door because he thought he heard the sound of the helicopter. He noticed the waves towering above so he shoved the door shut and ran inside the ruined lighthouse. The wind was howling like a wild animal. A few minutes later, he heard a whizzing noise and he opened the door and looked up. ‘Finally’ he thought. the helicopter flew down to the lighthouse and they were rescued.
By Sabaa
The waves were crashing and smashing against the lighthouse. The windows had smashed with the most terrifying noise I have ever seen and heard. I heard a deafening, ear splitting sound. I saw it was the helicopter, hovering above me. Suddenly I felt as if my life would be given to the ocean. As fast as I could, I slammed the door shut and … to my surprise I was alive. I heard the helicopter, so I was saved.
By Phoebe
In the lighthouse, I thought that the helicopter had come. But I looked out and saw a massive wave. It crashed against the lighthouse. I thought the lighthouse was sinking. I heard the eerie noise of the howling waves. I closed the door as quickly as I could. Then I heard a thud, thud, thud on the roof and it was the helicopter.
By Ciaran
May 6th, 2010 at 8:37 pm
The wow words were from were from some of the children. But the monsterous word was from meee!
May 6th, 2010 at 9:24 pm
The waves look gigantic on the diagram.[Picture]
May 7th, 2010 at 10:14 am
We like your picture .Are wow words to describe woud be. Wavy, fluffy and swishy.
May 7th, 2010 at 10:15 am
we like your picture.
Our wow words are, wavy, fluffy, roaring, swishing.
May 7th, 2010 at 4:36 pm
The waves are so so high.They nearly went to the top of the lighthouse.The man closed the door just in time before a wave hit the door.The windows were broken.The TV was broken.Everthing was broken in the lighthouse.
May 13th, 2010 at 9:20 pm
Well Done Sabaa, Pheobe and Ciaren ,that is a fantastic description of what happened there it felt like I was really there. Anyway I would like to give all three of you a big round of applause well done.
May 16th, 2010 at 8:55 am
The Lighthouse keeper thought he head the helicopter to save him. Miss FARR ISTHE BEST TEECH EVV.
May 28th, 2010 at 2:06 pm
The storm
In the light houes it was terrfying the noise of roaring sonud.I heard a howling sound I fort it was the hellacopter but it was a sea storm.All I could hear was the window smashing.Was it going to stand up to the mighty ocean? It felt like arms squeezing me tiet. Sunddly I heard the he he he hellcopter.
May 30th, 2010 at 12:13 pm
The monster waves are spooky
June 15th, 2010 at 7:40 pm
well done you three it is a grat piece of
work.
June 18th, 2010 at 9:45 pm
The waves were really skary.
July 11th, 2010 at 7:39 pm
I did not no that the crashing big waves was trying to get me .